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Post  Rev54 Tue Sep 16, 2008 12:00 am

Well, here's a start of a something.... i hope..... The building is empty, which maybe a good thing, cause are all buildings going to be accessible to walk in? or shall some just be stationary?


well anyways, this is what I threw together real quick just to see what I could think of, the texturing is bad and a bit difficult. there are doors and windows even tho there hard to see.

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so Ideas, constructive critiscim is welcome, let me know if im on right track or if I need to divert a train wreck!

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Post  runeblade Tue Sep 16, 2008 12:16 am

Im incapable of giving criticism but its neat none the less ^^.

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Post  SharinganMaster Tue Sep 16, 2008 4:13 am

well here's my CONSTRUCTIVE critisisim srry cant spell well its neat and nice but the roof need less poly but i like it your journey has just started yong one but in time you and destiny will meet Very Happy
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Post  Rave Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:31 am

thats look ok, u should change the blue color obviously :p and yes, you would be able to walk in buildings, although the wall needs to have a mass if u know what i mean, it cant just be one poly, if u know what i mean O_O
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Post  Pjotrkiller Tue Sep 16, 2008 7:32 am

Really nice building Razz
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Post  SerenoFlanjor Tue Sep 16, 2008 4:29 pm

Its a good start, I can see Jonin ninjas poofing there to meet and talk about there students, missions and threats to the village. However, you could use it as a base to make multiple Konoha like structures:

Overview:

http://static.playdo.com/1015/graciela_bonita/tabimages/Konoha.jpg

Several Structures:

https://2img.net/h/i105.photobucket.com/albums/m222/KakasheHataki/Konoha.jpg

Hokage's Palace w/mountain statues in the bg

https://2img.net/h/i118.photobucket.com/albums/o100/megan-chan/Konoha.jpg

3d view from Naruto: Rise of the Ninja

http://ichiwamaru.files.wordpress.com/2007/11/wallpaper_konoha1280x1024.png

Ichiraku Ramen

https://2img.net/h/i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/kai_hiwatari_girl/750px-Ichiraku_Ramen.jpg

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Post  Rev54 Tue Sep 16, 2008 4:47 pm

I have played Rise of a Ninja and I was trying to keep that in mind. As for Ichiraku Ramen shop, a bunch of people have already created it from what I have read in this forum, So I don't think Ill create my own version of it.

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Post  SerenoFlanjor Tue Sep 16, 2008 4:52 pm

Rev54 wrote:I have played Rise of a Ninja and I was trying to keep that in mind. As for Ichiraku Ramen shop, a bunch of people have already created it from what I have read in this forum, So I don't think Ill create my own version of it.

From what I saw they were all incomplete and inaccurately depicted but I guess their respective modelers will tune them up.

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Post  Umaterasu Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:07 pm

SerenoFlanjor wrote:
Rev54 wrote:I have played Rise of a Ninja and I was trying to keep that in mind. As for Ichiraku Ramen shop, a bunch of people have already created it from what I have read in this forum, So I don't think Ill create my own version of it.

From what I saw they were all incomplete and inaccurately depicted but I guess their respective modelers will tune them up.

All that our Ichiruka's Ramen shop needs is some texturizing.
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Post  SerenoFlanjor Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:22 pm

Umaterasu wrote:
SerenoFlanjor wrote:
Rev54 wrote:I have played Rise of a Ninja and I was trying to keep that in mind. As for Ichiraku Ramen shop, a bunch of people have already created it from what I have read in this forum, So I don't think Ill create my own version of it.

From what I saw they were all incomplete and inaccurately depicted but I guess their respective modelers will tune them up.

All that our Ichiruka's Ramen shop needs is some texturizing.

Besides the texturing doesn't it need the top building too? As well as other minor touch ups.

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Post  Umaterasu Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:33 pm

http://soundofstone.roflforum.net/buildings-and-other-architecture-f8/ramen-shop-who-wanna-finish-p-t84.htm
it has a top O.o
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Post  SerenoFlanjor Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:44 pm

Umaterasu wrote:http://soundofstone.roflforum.net/buildings-and-other-architecture-f8/ramen-shop-who-wanna-finish-p-t84.htm
it has a top O.o

Did you read the fourth post where the modeler states he hasn't finished the top building and then proceeds to put an image showing the top building?

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Post  Umaterasu Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:51 pm

oh :p ...i didn't see it...its an old post after all >.>
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Post  Rev54 Tue Sep 16, 2008 6:52 pm

inaccurate... man people are trying hard to put effort in these models. I think that anywho has created anything towards this project has done a great job.

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Post  SerenoFlanjor Tue Sep 16, 2008 9:25 pm

I did not say that to belittle anyone. It was an observation , you must understand any criticism I give is to help make the modeler better and to help make this project better.

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Post  Pjotrkiller Wed Sep 17, 2008 8:55 am

Lol yea I didnt finish Razz I am not good at moddeling xD
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Post  Sorlaize Wed Sep 17, 2008 10:24 am

Rev54 wrote:inaccurate... man people are trying hard to put effort in these models. I think that anywho has created anything towards this project has done a great job.

He's right though. The idea of criticism and comments is that people can develop ideas or content with guidance. Whatever you can contribute is good.

And at this stage not a lot of content is being used in the game anyway, so we'll push more for quality when the content is needed. In order to have a high quality game, criticism must have a central play in content development. Smile

@Pjotr: You are a good modeller.
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Post  SeanAsberry Wed Sep 17, 2008 4:59 pm

http://static.playdo.com/1015/graciela_bonita/tabimages/Konoha.jpg
good job and at the link. in konoha i actually see a building that looks similar so keep up the good work.
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Post  Rave Thu Sep 18, 2008 1:25 am

guys , the cities dont need to be exactly like the manga at all u know xD
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Post  runeblade Thu Sep 18, 2008 2:50 am

But i have no creative mind what-so-ever anymore so until theirs concept for me to copy ill copy the manga Very Happy.

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Post  Rev54 Sat Sep 20, 2008 12:04 am

Heres something a bit different then what I originally did. I still not done, not textured, and theres nothing inside because I'm not sure what I should put in it? a bathroom? living room? bedroom? a urinal would be a nice touch!

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